Hey Aimnda, I think I know Hey Aimnda, I think I know where you were trying to get with this track. Is it a work in progress? If you are still working on this I would suggest to try a few of the following things:
[ - ] The piano lines are a bit undefined. It sounds good, but it's not a catchy melody. I think you could easily get there if you add a few extra notes at the right spots.
[ - ] Shorten the intro and cut out a few parts. Roughly, the part from 0.30 - 2.00 doesn't add much to the song. I think it would be more interesting to crossfade/blend the piano with the new uplifting tunes and introduce the beat when the piano's gone
[ - ] Look at the song structure. Think of a song with verses, chorusses and refrains. Listen carefully to songs you like and analyse how these are structured. You'll notice a lot of songs have a very similar arrangement.
// Good luck and keep posting your work!